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Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Lost


Lost
Story
Nick W.
6/4/12

            The woods is a dark and scary place, especially if you’re an 8 year old kid who doesn’t have a clue as to what is going on.  Yes, 8 year old, innocent, little Jacob was in the woods, alone in the woods, without a clue as to how he got there or what to do. One minute he was home alone the next he was being tied up and thrown out of a moving car. When little Jacob woke up he was in the woods all by his lonesome. He looked to his right and to his left but he saw nothing but trees and trees for miles and miles. He remembered his mom once told him what to do when he didn’t know where he was, but he wasn’t really listening considering his mom had just bought him a new video game. He probably should have listened. As he snapped back into reality he saw something approaching from his left, he turned and ran to the right. He ran and ran for what seemed to be miles. He was getting tired but he kept running and running. He slowed down when he had the assurance that the thing didn’t follow him. He looked around and realized the he was……………………Lost.

2 comments:

  1. It was good but i was confused about what was going on

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  2. It was very creative(I liked the me reference)

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